Goal:
- retell a story in my own words
- Always use capital letters and full stops
Every weekend Hemi had to mow the lawns and Hemi hated mowing the lawns. He would rather be in the shed making his new invention. Then Hemi had a great idea what if I made an invention that would mow the lawns for him. So he went into the shed and got a pair of scissors and some steak knifes a blender dad's nose hair trimmer and a laser pointer some old guitar strings and an old computer. He spent all night working on his invention, the next morning Hemi wheeled his invention onto the lawn then he revealed the invention he had created. He typed into the remote. Start the lawn mower, then the mower cut the lawns then Hemi fell asleep too the sound of his mower. Hemi woke up to the sound of a crowd yelling and his invention was nowhere to be seen. So Hemi ran down the street and everyone was bald. Cats were chasing them because the lawnmower was using its laser pointer to point it on the people then Hemi sore his lawnmower cutting down a big building. So Hemi went to the top of the building and fought the lawnmower. Hemi won. Then Hemi built an invention to make people’s hair grow back by putting their head in it when they had hair. It was the best weekend ever.
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