My Holiday

A week ago I went to Castlepoint with my Nana and Poppa and their dog. It was windy. I nearly blew away. We walked up to the lighthouse and then we walked around the beach. I went for a swim in the water. Then I saw a motorbike. He was doing drifts until he tipped it. A man was clay bird shooting. We went up on the rocks. There were people fishing. They didn’t catch anything. When we walked back to the camper van we saw some big boats, they were crayfish boats. Then we had to drive home. I had lots of fun. I got lollies. We had to stop lots to let the dog out. I want to go to castle point again.

By Ben

We have been leaning to use adjectives and interesting words to make our work exciting